Student Name_____________________________ Form of Assessment: Self Peer Instructor Peer Responder Name______________
Indicator |
1—Beginning |
2—Developing |
3—Skilled |
4--Exemplary |
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Topic Sentence |
Does not appear to have a topic sentence |
Topic sentence is clearly stated but may not be in an appropriate place in the paragraph. It has one or two of the basic characteristics (narrow, specific, worthwhile, arguable) |
Topic sentence is clearly stated in an appropriate place in the paragraph and has at least two thesis characteristics (narrow, specific, worthwhile, arguable) |
Thesis is clearly stated in an appropriate place in the paragraph and is narrow, specific, worthwhile, and arguable |
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Title and Opening |
The paragraph does not have a title, does not clearly establish an opening and does not prepare the reader for the content of the paragraph. |
The paragraph has a basic title, establishes an opening and provides some minimal information to prepare the reader for the content of the paragraph. |
The paragraph has an effective title, the opening uses an attention-catching technique and provides most of the needed information to prepare the reader for the content of the paragraph. |
The title and opening very effectively capture the reader’s attention and very effectively prepare the reader for the content of the paragraph. |
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Closing |
The paragraph does not have a clear closing and/or raises new ideas in the closing |
The closing of the paragraph may not clearly link back to the thesis, but does give a general feeling of closure to the paragraph’s ideas; a related but new idea might be introduced |
The closing of the paragraph makes a general link to the thesis, gives a very general feeling of completion of the paragraph’s ideas, and does not introduce any new ideas |
The closing of the paragraph very effectively links to the thesis, completes the ideas of the paragraph, and does not introduce any new ideas |
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Grammar, Mechanics, Spelling |
There are numerous mistakes with grammar, mechanics, and spelling which interfere with the paragraph’s meaning and overall readability |
There are some major mistakes with grammar, mechanics, and spelling and some of those mistakes may interfere with clear meaning and overall readability |
There are some mistakes with grammar, mechanics, and spelling but none which interfere with clear meaning and overall readability |
There are few or no mistakes with grammar, mechanics, and spelling |
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Unity |
Ideas do not connect to each other and to the main idea well. Difficult to understand how they relate to the topic. |
Few ideas connect to each other, supporting the thesis, but it is still fairly difficult to understand the point of the paragraph. |
Ideas connect to each other and to the main idea, and even though the connections are not strong, it is possible to understand the point of the paragraph. |
Ideas connect well to the main idea or topic sentence, and it is easy to understand the point of the paragraph. |
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